Review: The Good Doctor

The Good Doctor: A Yaoi Short - Amelita Rae

Oh yeah, this was dirrrrrrrty.

 

The doctor was saying something about feeling for masses or abnormalities as he began to thrust his finger back and forth inside his bottom, but the young man was far too turned on to process anything he was saying. His cock was rock-hard, wobbling back and forth between Mitsu’s splayed legs and leaking all over the exam table as he lewdly humped his ass back onto the Dr. Asaka’s finger.

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The one thing that pulled me out of the story was the not so great writing.

We were supposed to be in Mitu's head. Why where there constantly phrases thrown in like: "The beautiful young man looked up."?