Craving the Boy Band (MMMMM Gay Menage Celebrity Rock Star Erotica)

Craving the Boy Band (MMMMM Gay Menage Celebrity Rock Star Erotica) - Hugh Blackwood Impromptu Buddy Porn Read with Marte, Marco, Julie, and Elsbeth

Well…. this was… eeuhh…. different… I am always in for a good porny read, but this was really not that good. I did like the premise of a boy band orgy. And our MC, John sure was enthusiastic, I had to give him that. But the words used to describe things were a bit of a turn off….

Man-pussy…. Really??? This is what you come up with when writing a PWP?
Member….. sigh… been there, done that… hate that word. Used way too often in books. We have beautiful words people: cock and dick! Use them.

And I’ve learned a new word today: Shlock. I think I will try to use this in a sentence tomorrow.

He pulled back and slid his cock out with a wet shlock and John gasped for breath.

Overall, it was a nice story, just not that nice…
And I for one am going to fantasize about these guys getting it on with each other…

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Ha! Had you there, didn’t I….