Pull Me Under

Pull Me Under - Zarah Detand DNF at 60%

I never felt as if I was there. Ben constantly got lost in his own thoughts when having a conversation with someone. When the other one spoke again, I was so lost I had no idea what they were talking about.
I am not sure the author meant for Ben to be this ADD-ish.

Story itself was promising, but the execution got on my nerve. Ben’s mind was never quiet and not in an overly detailed kind of way, but more in a jumbled mess kind of way. Very frustrating and confusing.